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Pyro
Sept 3, 2006 18:55:22 GMT 10
Post by zortane on Sept 3, 2006 18:55:22 GMT 10
Name: John Allerdyce, Age: 23 Hight: 5 feet 11.5 inches Colour: Orange and red. Appearence: Personality: Pyro is a maniac. He takes great pleasure in watching reruns of magneto’s “death”. Family: No known, History: Born in Sydney, Australia, Pyro's mutant power to manipulate flame emerged in his teens, but he was unable to find a practical use for his ability. After years of working in Southeast Asia as a journalist and novelist, Pyro met the mutant Magneto. He joined the acolytes and, Pyro did work with the acolytes under command of several of Magneto's subordinates who alternately supervised the group. He was revealed as a mutant in DAY OF RECKONING 2. With the death of Magneto, Pyro is the only Acolyte who's remained behind, though this is mostly to take advantage of his former leaders base. He spends most of his free time just watching replays of Magneto's death, which he is endlessly amused by. Power: He has the ability to control flame. Role play: .Pyro was sitting in the Acolytes base when he heard a Sing sing sing.. The roof fell down. Wolverine jumped. In but before wolvie could get close pyro extended a wall of fire and then a circle of fire and trapped wolverine. “WHERE IS THE FIRE?” Wolverine yelled.
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Pyro
Sept 4, 2006 3:33:34 GMT 10
Post by frosty101 on Sept 4, 2006 3:33:34 GMT 10
Alright lets discuss some things shall we?First off it's very noticeable that you just copy and pasted most of your bio from Wikipedia.I am not a fan of plagiarism and I am sure that whoever took the time to write that up would be very pissed at you for having used their work without some credit.second this is a Evo based rpg so you are going to have to re-vamp your bio to fit this universe.Oh also even if this wasn't a Evo based rpg from what I've read about your character's background he is deceased!I am not trying to be a b*tch ,but I think you should make a new bio centered around the Evo Pyro.
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Pyro
Sept 4, 2006 11:07:38 GMT 10
Post by I HAVE A NAME. on Sept 4, 2006 11:07:38 GMT 10
Frosty, I have told him about all that on MSN, but yeh, Pyro is really quite alive. Hes a maniac so you have to put it in his bio.
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Pyro
Sept 7, 2006 16:35:14 GMT 10
Post by captiantoenail on Sept 7, 2006 16:35:14 GMT 10
hi
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Pyro
Sept 10, 2006 21:30:02 GMT 10
Post by I HAVE A NAME. on Sept 10, 2006 21:30:02 GMT 10
Im gonna, Say ACCEPTED.
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Pyro
Sept 10, 2006 21:43:31 GMT 10
Post by zortane on Sept 10, 2006 21:43:31 GMT 10
yay I got accepted.
I'd like to thank my mother & father for bringing me into the world, my friends & family for supporting me my hole career, My manager, the tean in @ Newcastle (have a drink 4 me guys), all of my fans, Glen for accepting me, frosty for puty me on the straight & narrow, All those ppl in the slve factory in China making all my clothes, all the ppl in africa that have starved for this, and for everybody in the universe that I havn't mentioned.
It means alot 2 me and I'm sure it means alot to u 2.
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Pyro
Sept 11, 2006 2:31:04 GMT 10
Post by frosty101 on Sept 11, 2006 2:31:04 GMT 10
Accepted under one condition no more copy and pasting DO YOU UNDERSTAND ME!
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